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honey suckle a kiba love story

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(this is about a 15 year old girl name hanako who goes out with kiba and they ..)

The sad kunoichi sat in her bed wiping the tears from her purple eyes that she cried for hours .'why kiba kun ,why' she thought.Her green medium length hair fell to her face and the tears fell on to her pillow that smelled like kiba.as she thought about the sight of kiba kissing  and licking the cheek of another woman.not only another woman.momo. the backstabbing freak of every girl.

'why.i thought i would be enough for you. i loved you.you dont love ...m-m-me. you love that... that....' Hanako started crying again.she just sat up and waited for the sun to come down and the darkness to arrive.and it did when she heard a knock on her door.

"hanako chan please open up!" She already knew who it was."no! i never ever want to see you again kiba,NEVER..!i loved you for ever and i found out you dont really care by you sucking on some girl cheek .get out of here!" "hanako chan please listen.it's n-" "DONT TELL ITS NOT WHAT I THINK CAUSE I SAW WHAT I AM THINKING." "Chan...please...let me explain."kiba was begging. "*sniff*its over" was all hanako said .That hit kiba hard in the heart.

he then walked away from the door.and away from the apartment.he walked in to the training forest next to a water fall.He walked behind a water fall which held a cave.Kiba entered the cave. He sat on a rock and started crying.

'The woman.the lady that holds my heart in her hands.the one who cared.the one of my dreams.gone!' kiba thought as he cried inthe palm of his hands. 'the worst thing is i dont even know what happen. all i know is i smelt hanako's perfume in the dark of my room and someone started kissing me. i thought it was my angel. but no it was that whore. why did i believe her UGh! '

kiba just sat there as his heart shattered in to little shards . he walked out of the cave and to his house. but...he only made in to the front door and knocked. as his sister opened it,he fainted. she picked him up and brought him to the hospital .

Hanako stayed into her room for another hour then got up to answer the door ...again.This time it was sakura.Hanako quickly hugged sakura and started crying.She told sakura what kiba did and how she broke up with him.."Sakura chan i really want to go back but, i already know that he wouldnt want me too.besides he has all the love he needs with his first love hanako.she probably does deserve him."Hanako wiped her tears,but more fell. "Hanako chan, kiba loves you and  he always will." "no he doesnt.he just wants me to stay away now" "well that is not what i heard when he was begging at your door to come in" "how should i believe him. he lied to me.".i know because right now he is in the hospital." "WHAT?!" "yes.He checked in about an hour ago.He was suffering from the cold heart disease.It only comes when he was severely hurt mentally." hanako looked at sakura with the most terrifying look in her eyes. "yes hanako.that means when you broke up with him,it broke his heart,when his sister brought him in,he couldnt even walk" "really?"

                                      at the hospital
kiba woke in a bed in a hospital gown . The nurse entered."good morning!good to see that you're awake. Many people were thinking the worse."kiba looked around witha confused look on his face."how long was i asleep?" "about a week," "a week!?" "yes, many were worried for you,especially a young girl with big purple eyes and green hair...oh she also smelled like honey suckle...oh bless her soul, she was crying tears of fright and she looked like she was getting sick.she kept saying she was sorry for what ever happend between you two.and how she wanted to change what happend." kiba's eyes widened. "a girl with green hair...smells like honey suckle?THATS HANAKO!" "yes that was her name.poor girl , you frightend her kiba she then stopped coming ...i dk why though. she loves you a whole lot kiba" Kiba got out of his bed faster than the speed of sound and ran to hanako's house.he didnt care that he was in a hospital gown


at her house
Kiba didnt even care what happend and he busted the door down.He saw hanako sitting on the couch watching a scary movie,and him knocking down her door just made her more frightend. kiba looked at her...'she would never watch a movie like that...without me.' kiba then looked at her.she was shivering and crying.'she's scared.' he thought.'she tried to be brave and watch the movie without me...but she cant...'

Kiba walked over to her and sat down next to her.she was still shivering and her  face was covered by a pillow she put over her face. kiba moved the pillow from hanako's body and  moved his arms around hanako hugging  her really tight "hana-chan,i'm sorry" Hanako couldnt say anything no matter how much she wanted to.she was still mad and sad and now confused.She just kept shivering.

"fine dont say anything,just listen. i am sorry for all the pain i caused you.i dont know what i was thinking. wait yes i do . i thought it was you i was kissing because the lights were off and all i did was smell the perfume that she wore wich was yours. the honey suckle perfume that you always wear and i love. and you know i loved it.i am so sorry.i wish i paid more attention to you.you are the first girl that i ever had to make me feel the love that i need from you and much much more.i never ever regreted it. i love more than i anyone else i have ever loved.. im so so very sorry. please take me back. i am begging you...and i am only begging because you told me you never wanted to see me ever again.and *sniff*...it ....its hard to know that the one i love,cherish,the one i am happy with never wants to see me again. and i want to spend everyday of my life with you know matter what happends. and i dont want to spend my life with the one i love know ing that she does not love me back.i also dont want to spend my life thinking what if i didnt went back to ask for her love back...what if i stayed home ...what if i said i didnt love you anymore when the truth was i loved you more than life. i dont want to live thinking that.so please chan take me back."

kiba started crying more tears that usual.he never cried like that before. he just wanted to be with his love once again.."i wish i never did that whole cheating thing happend.it changed everything. .it might have changed how you felt about me.but it never ever changed how i felt about you.i know you might hate me so much hana- chan,but... i love you. hanako.i love you...but if you never ever want to see me again...i would...*sniff*understand. i brought you more pain than i ever did." hanako started crying in happiness. a smile crept up on her face.

She hugged kiba back as there foreheads touched.her tears fell on to his shoulder as she hugged him. "i never...ever thought you would  love me like that.i always thought it was only the words 'i love you' and that was it. i thought you only loved me with little thought . sakura told me that you were blinded by the nose scent of the perfume .i was thinking about going back to you but i thought  you didnt want anything to do with meh."
kiba looked at her and pecked her on the lips." you thought so very wrong." "i love you kiba." "i love you too,my honey suckle"They sat there and watched the movie.hanako knowing that kiba was there to protect her once again
omg i love kiba along with deidara and gaara.yeah i am weird.lovers.
awwwwwwwwthis story made myself cry...and i wrote it

♥~asia

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